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Love’s spell

I admit I was afraid to love
Made my heart closed for belove,
Thought I would get hurt by love
So I had no space for love in my nerve

Here Fate plays well, though I ran
Love clasped my soul apart my ban
My brain ordered heart not to began –
Love episodes bcoz it will end in vain

Who could escape from love’s spell?
I was trapped in love, that filled my skull
Though brain screamed “what if you fall?”
Heart opted for the thing, way for hell

Obviously love story wouldn’t be fairy tale
Instead of blush cheeks would get pale
Like roller-coaster ride you curse and hail
After all it’s rush of oxytocin in us to avail

By mitty

loving to enjoy the world completely

13 replies on “Love’s spell”

Wow Mitty. How strongly you ended it.
Last stanza is highly appreciated.

I absolutely loved how the entire poem rhymed flawlessly.

“Though brain screamed β€œwhat if you fall?”
Heart opted for the thing, way for hell”
Just beautiful lines!

I really liked this one!

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Thank you so much Rashmi. Your comments give smile on my face. It’s great to have this comment from you.
The lines you liked most are my favourite too actually it’s an emotion for many right.

Many people afraid to love someone at times.Later without acknowledging they tend to love someone apart from its consequences.

I am glad that you loved my words. Stay happy dear πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ€—

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I likes it. The lines, ‘My brain ordered heart not to began –
Love episodes bcoz it will end in vain’, are pervasive it seems. It is hilarious how, at times, we wish [read order] not to fall in love and how unintentionally by wishing so we dig a pool full of emotions and love. If it works well, we swim together. If not, we get drowned into it due to the shallow heaviness. Well.

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Thank you so much for reading and giving amazing comments. I am happy that you liked my words.
Yeah, love is like that right. It will find us though we hesitate. Today your comment mean a lot to me.
Stay happy 😊😊

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